User:Movadoor/Onymacris unguicularis/Sachi.sb Peer Review

General info
Movadoor
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Onymacris unguicularis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Onymacris unguicularis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall I think this article was very well written with the information being concise but ample. I would pay attention to sentence structure and maintaining a consistent verb tense throughout paragraphs to make sure the information is easily readable and flows well. Additionally, I would focus on most of the information being about the beetle itself rather than peripheral information (e.g. not including details about the Namib Desert itself in the Geographic Range section but rather how the Namib Desert is relevant as this beetle's habitat).