User:Mozartgirl

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Very Readable!

Personally, I really liked the conversational style of this article. That it isn't "encyclopedia language" in my opinion adds to the readability and accesibility. I found it MUCH easier to follow than the article on the French Revolution, which was quite confusing. I will comment, however, that it does seem a bit biased in favor of Marie Antoinette and King Louis XVI, as opposed to most of history which judges them fairly harshly. I wish a few more of the facts presented had references and sources cited. Overall, I liked it! -Debbie L.