User:Mp3frog/Lang Rongrien, Thailand/Lilianavanzutphen Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mp3frog


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mp3frog/Lang_Rongrien%2C_Thailand?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * does not exist

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * This article is not supported by references, but when they are added throughout the article it can be improved! There is information on the site, but no reliable sources independent of the subject. The information presented should be supported with references and citations in order to make the information reliable and more accessible for others to further research the topic. The article does follow the patterns of other similar articles. It has headings and subheadings, although besides the lead, there is no information filled out in the other headings and subheadings. The organization is good and is a good start for the rest of the article! There also could be some images added for more media and to make the page a little more presentable. The outline gives a clear indictation of the information to be presented. This article is also yet to have links within it to make it more discoverable, but there are opportunities present to do so, which is also a good start. The content added in this sandbox is a good improvement of the overall quality of the article, although it can be made more complete as there are a lot of gaps. The grammar and some spelling errors should be revised in the lead. It gives a good background for when excavations took place, and gives a brief description of the site and its geography. The lead sets up the rest of the article well by mentioning archaeological findings and is a good precursor to what further information may be added. The content can be improved by filling in the other headings and subheading topics already laid out. It would be more complete if the information presented was expanded. Overall it is a great start to a promising article that could be very well organized.