User:Mparra179/1978 FIFA World Cup/APC04OU Peer Review

Everything is looking really good.

'''The sources used are really informative and make the article more complete when the info was added. It makes the source stronger.'''

The added info is neutral and shows no bias, it shows how things went down.

The sources comes from strong newspaper articles and secondary sources.

The citations are really good, I just want to bring up in the Cambridge article, there is a copyright with it, so I don't know if that could cause an issue with the copyright lesson we did.

The content flows with the article it definitely looks like it belongs in the article.

In the first citation, maybe get rid of the "In fact" and just have the sentence start with "The new government"

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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):1978 FIFA World Cup
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):1978 FIFA World Cup

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