User:Mparra179/1978 FIFA World Cup/Nativeteacher Peer Review

General info
Mparra179
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mparra179/1978_FIFA_World_Cup?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):1978 FIFA World Cup

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead has been updated. The lead gives a good understanding of what the article is about. The additions to the lead that are not in the original article have been added by the editor to the article's body. The content that is added is relevant. The content does not appear to be out of place, and the content does appear to be neutral. There are good sources added to support the content that has been added. Work that was original to the article lacks sources to back it up. The content about the player whose family was tied up at gun point is unsubstantiated. The claim that a player from West Germany chose not to participate due to political concerns is also unsubstantiated. The order of the content makes sense, however, the titles could be updated, since one is "Article body." There are many images in the original article, all of which make sense to have. The work added is good and adds quality to the article.