User:Mpatel48/Manipulation (psychology)/Gsch23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mpatel48


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mpatel48/Manipulation_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Manipulation (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, I appreciate that you seem to be putting in more so neutral view points of manipulation through positive manipulation as well as how mental illness can cause people to be blind to the fact they may be a manipulator. I think that's a great addition to the article! When it comes to everything you've written, I think you've done a great job. After reading the published article, I think some positive changes would be potentially adding more to the 'assessment tools' portion and maybe going through the 'Psychopathy in the workplace' section to see if it's actually beneficial to the article. Keep up the great work! :)