User:Mpatel48/Manipulation (psychology)/Kayoff Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mpatel48


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mpatel48/Manipulation_%28psychology%29/Kayoff_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Manipulation (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you are off to a great start with your article. The Lead does a very good job of explaining the topic as well as what you plan to talk about throughout the article. I would consider changing some of the wording leading to your introduction/ explanation of positive manipulation. You could also add some of the additional information about positive manipulation to the characteristic section of the article. The article seems to stay very neutral, and you did really well on adding left out information such as with the definitions and relations of the disorders and manipulation. All of the sources seem to be up-to-date and relevant to the topic. I think your idea of adding more about the techniques of manipulation will help add to gaps in content. You could also consider looking at the signs and stages of manipulation or how manipulation can happen in different context. Overall great job! The article is very informative and easy to read, I look forward to seeing how it progresses!