User:Mpatel48/Manipulation (psychology)/Psychcap Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mpatel48


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mpatel48/Manipulation_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead looks good and the tone is neutral. I think I want more information about the personalities that are talked about directly after the lead. The lead focuses a lot of what manipulation is and good versus bad manipulation. Everything written in the sandbox so far looks very neat and oddly. It is easy to read and I can't find any spelling errors. The amount of sources is good and looks thorough. I cannot notice one space that is lacking in sources to back up the information talked about. All sources are up to date in my opinion. No sources seems alarmingly out dated. Nothing seems biased. All the information is straightforward. Maybe the paragraphs can be marked off into separate sections. Each disorder has a different heading and then following paragraph is about that disorder. Overall it looks like a lot of info was added which explains manipulations through the eyes of psychology very well. I find the topic very interesting and the literature engaging.