User:Mpatel48/Manipulation (psychology)/Srivera6 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mpatel48


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mpatel48/Manipulation_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Manipulation (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The information you added to the Lead is great. You did a good job summing up what you plan on adding to the overall article. You did well adding a summary to what you will go on to add later! You are also doing a great job by adding information on the connection between manipulation and mental illness. It is great that you are filling in the gaps that are currently there.

As I looked at the current article, I noticed that a couple of the references cited are pretty out of date. I wonder if the information regarded to these references is also out of date, or if it is possible to find newer references that back this information up. If not, it might be ideal to remove some of this information from the article.

I really like the way that the article uses a table to describe the vulnerabilities commonly exploited. Maybe there is a way to add another table to some of the information in the article. It is a robust topic and I think some of the information can get lost easily with all the paragraphs. The table does a good job of splitting information up and separating it from the rest of the article, instead of it looking as overwhelming and jumbled up.