User:Mpf53/Sickle cell disease/HoyaHoops Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Mpf53)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mpf53/Sickle cell disease


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sickle cell disease

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I really enjoyed reading this wiki excerpt. I thought that there was a clear and detailed flow to the writing. I didn't notice any particular bias, but I was curious about the credibility of the Sickle Cell Association of Uganda source that is cited multiple times. I like how you address the topic from the medical aspect as well as the aspect of people in Uganda. The sources all seem okay, and I assume it was harder to find scientific/scholarly research on this topic given the lack of research since the 1970s you mentioned in the writing.