User:Mpoul016/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Outline of business management

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

The reason why I chose this article is to gain a little bit more information on the management side of business and the type of management depending on the year period and the industry your in. I chose this article because I too want to manege my business and this gives me acces to the base of every major types of managerment. It matters because it ias a part of my life has my parent both had their own companies that they managed in different fields. My first impression was that its short and vague, there is a lot of information missing according to me and my past conversations with my connections partners or friends. There little writing and little explaining on how mangement can be done in a psychologival way.

Evaluate the article

(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

The article introduction is very vague, and it shows that it was written maybe by one person or small group sharing the need to say the least. The introduction only mention that management is all about delegating, there isnt any content on emplyee management or time management in the introduction which is a key to succes in managing a business or company. The content is limited to clicking on all the links that provide a definition for the word that may be usued inside of business management, all the link do lead to a good samll explanation/definition of the word but other than that there isnt much content or point of reference to huge corporation who had to deal with management a certain way and they constant modernisation of the art of managing. The article is neutral, the sources usues are from definitions and other wikipidians, The article is to a certain point well written but other than definition their isnt much, no pictures of a hierachy plan that may be reference to the americain or europeen sty of business but nothing.

The article can be improved by the doing the following :

Add picutres of corporations and there business management ladder, therefore we have a clear image of what role you have would lead to certain type of management.

Add facts to the article from business who had to change their complete management structure to be able to prosper threw the modernisation of management

Explain the main challenges received by manager while dealing with the workforce

The article has all the definitions which gives us a vague and minimal idea and base.

The article is poorly developped.