User:Mr. Jotatohead/Freshwater biology/CONeal19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mr. Jotatohead


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mr.%20Jotatohead/Freshwater_biology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Freshwater biology

Evaluate the drafted changes
I just realized that the peer review I did the first time never posted, so I am doing it again.

Overall I think you did a really good job covering the beginnings of a super broad topic that had basically nothing written on it yet. I liked how you covered a lot of information while keeping everything relevant and tied together. Using the link tool to allow readers to find more information about specific topics and species on Wikipedia helped to keep the article on track, but still gives the opportunity for a broader amount of information.

The only problems I saw were some minor grammatical errors that could be quickly fixed with a second read through, (Lakes is listed twice in the third sentence, influence should be plural in the 5th sentence, the 6th sentence would read better with a comma after the word lakes, etc.) and your second reference (SpringerLink) did not want to work for me. I was able to Google it; the link listed in the reference just took me to the general website after telling me they updated their website.