User:Mr. Know-It-All/Pages to edit

These are pages I found, often through RC patrol, that need to be edited. Perhaps some of them I should put in Cleanup. The common criteria for them is that fixing them will take longer than an average fixup takes. They will stay here from the time I find them, until I have time to fix them.


 * Cleopatra (band) - from the first sentence I'm confused. "Cleopatra is a musical group from the UK comprising three sisters Cleopatra also know as Cleo, Yonah, and Zainam Higgins."  What does that mean, the sisters are all named Cleopatra?    Should there be a period between the word sisters and Cleopatra?  I have to do independent (Google) research of the band and fix up this page I found while on RC patrol.
 * Sringeri Sharada Peetham - a page put up by someone for who English is probably a second language. In the history section it talks about the appearance of a goddess, have to make sure it says something like "The sacred texts say that the goddess appeared" or something like that.
 * Sisters Minor of Mary Immaculate - a page I NPOV'd and should fill out more on.