User:Mr.mowgs/Mycobacterium lepromatosis/Hollow8 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mr. Mowgs


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mr.mowgs/Mycobacterium_lepromatosis?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Roseiflexus castenholzii

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: Pathological interests, discovery date, distinction. Excellent and concise.

Content: Very interesting and adds depth to DLL. Maybe add a link to reductive evolution for laymen. Otherwise great work so far.