User:Mr.wiredancer/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Coney Island
 * Article Evaluation
 * Island in the city, it's indeed habitual for us to know about. But what is the island, or accurately, a peninsula in a such a populated city look like? How is the climate? Does it have a taste of New York? That's the questions pop up in my mind when hearing about Coney Island but not yet experiencing it. The lead section provides a general idea about Coney Island as a shorten version of introduction. Texts are backed up with figures and a lot of datas. Also, you can see the links with specific words when reading the article, which are supported with evidence. Descriptions and words being used in this article have a neutral tone. The article is presented by summing up information about several sections such as history, transportation, and geography, and these sections are basically being presented with facts and information instead of stories. The descriptions make sense, so that as a reader, the texts are clear to understand. As an encyclopedia, it does satisfy nearly all the thresholds and requirements of wikipedia article requirements. This article provides a professional expression for Coney Island in different aspects.
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Option 2

 * Pitaya
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article provides a clear and professional expressions from both biological and geographic aspects to introduce the dragon fruit. The "vernacular names" section introduce the history of its name "pitaya". However, the history of fruit itself is not provided. Also, the paragraph mainly describes the feature and taste of dragon fruit species that are in Latin America but giving enough descriptions for those that are widely distributed in Asia or other continents. It will be better to provide a comparison of the dragon fruit species from South America and South East Asia, since they do have significant difference in either the taste, feature, and even the price. In that sense, it will give an overall more comprehensive description. The article uses accurate words with neutral tone that ensure both the validity and readability of the texts. Also, the information being provided is up to date. There are tables for nutrition content and figures for different types of dragon fruit to assist evaluating characteristics of dragon fruit. This article is overall well-structured except for missing some perspectives of contents.
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 * https://www.vagabondjourney.com/pitaya-or-dragon-fruit-review/
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 * https://www.vagabondjourney.com/pitaya-or-dragon-fruit-review/

Option 3

 * Guangzhou Foreign Language School 
 * Article Evaluation
 * The description for Guangzhou Foreign Language School is quite short, but it covers some basic information about the school. Also, it does cover some figures of the school so it is overall informative.
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