User:MrJockin/Meiothermus/Moss Enthusiast Peer Review

General info
I am reviewing the edits made by MrJockin on the Meiothermus article, which can be found here.

Evaluate the drafted changes
From what I can tell, most of the article was already written before you started, so I will mostly just be considering what you wrote yourself.

Lead

I know this was already written, but perhaps you could add some of what you wrote to this section.

Content

What you added to the article was very useful for understanding this genus of bacteria, so it was all relevant. I suppose the only thing I could ask is if there is any more information around that you could have added, but what you did have was all very good.

Tone and Balance

What you wrote, as well as the rest of the article, is very good in terms of tone and balance.

Sources and References

You cited your source well, and you got information from it without copying anything so I would say you did a good job there.

Organization

The part that you wrote is very well-written and easy to understand. You also placed your section in the best possible spot, and in doing so, made the article very easy to read.

Overall

I doubt there was much more you could have added that would have fit into the article well, so I think you did a good job on adding to this article. Adding a characteristics section was the wisest move for this article, since it already had some other sections already made. My only suggestion would be to add a little of what you wrote to the lead section.