User:Mrb6789/Boreal ecosystem/Fishmansf4 Peer Review

General info
User:Mrb6789
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Mrb6789/Boreal ecosystem - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Boreal ecosystem - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I feel that it is overall a good start. Although I would change the wording of a couple of the sentences. For example, I would change "and making ecosystems vulnerable to changing to other ecosystem types." to "and the destruction of the ecosystem".