User:Mrichardson4/Sherlock Holmes/BornUnderPunches Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mrichardson4, Roghikt, Turquoise98


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mrichardson4/Sherlock_Holmes?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sherlock Holmes

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead- I don't think its fair to make the claim that all Sherlock stories have a theme of contagion - so I would specify which ones or simply state that many of them do. Other than that the lead is very clear and concise.

Content- I think the content in the section is strong, but I think you should talk a bit more about the other Sherlock stories if your goal is to add this to the main Sherlock page, otherwise I would simply put this section in an article specifically on the Speckled band.

Tone and Balance - I don't see any extreme issues of tone but I think it is important to state who is talking about this contagion to make it clear that this is a scholarly critique. I also think tying in some specific references to the fear of the orient at the time will help support the section.

Sources - I don't really see any quotations from the sources, nor do i see any specific mentions of articles within the section itself. I think its important for you to introduce who is offering this critique instead of just citing them at the end of the sentence.

Organization- I think the organization makes sense, and if you do decide to talk about other stories this format would work well for that.

Overall this is a good draft and I think it will be easy to make these edits to improve the draft.