User:Mrkite412/Monroe's motivated sequence/Peerdrew12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mrkite412


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mrkite412/Monroe's motivated sequence
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Monroe's motivated sequence
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Monroe's motivated sequence

Evaluate the drafted changes
I liked how you included a study to show how they were more influenced by the explanation using Monroe’s motivated sequence. I was able to understand what the theory was based on your explanation. I would suggest you add more details about why the explanation using Monroe’s motivated sequence was extremely higher for them to understand. This would give the reader a better understanding. The most important thing you could do to improve the article would be to add more details about the study. Other than that, great job!