User:Mrl058/Wildlife conservation/NeptunePlayss Peer Review

General info
(Mrl058)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Mrl058/Wildlife conservation - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Wildlife conservation - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Sandbox is currently just an outline. More information is needed before publishing. I would suggest leaving out point 1a as it is more of an opinionated section. Overall outline is good, just needs to be completed.