User:Mroghair/Massilia (bacterium)/Mr.mowgs Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mroghair


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mroghair/Massilia (bacterium)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Massilia (bacterium)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

Concise, yet thorough lead. Straight forward in presentation of information. Lead introduces all major sections in article.

Tone/Balance:

Article maintained a neutral tone throughout.

Content:

Content was relevant to topic and organized in a digestible manner.

Sources and References:

Source/reference links work. All sources are reputable, originating from peer reviewed scientific articles. A broad range of sources were used.

Images/Media:

No images/media to comment on.

Overall comments/impressions:

Thorough article for the number of categories/topics used. Good mediation of scientific jargon, especially when sources were solely peer-reviewed scientific articles. Maybe try to incorporate media and/or visuals of some kind.