User:Mrothroc/Dihydrogen phosphate/Gsloan18 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mrothroc


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mrothroc/Dihydrogen phosphate
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dihydrogen phosphate

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Grammatical change: 3rd sentence: change 'and therefore, are' to 'and are therefore'

Information added in first section is good, but should not all be in the lead section. The lead section should be a brief description of the most important information in the article. Consider forming an additional section(s) to divide up this information.

Instead of explaining what emulsifying agents are, make that phrase a hyperlink to its own Wiki page. Same with surface-activating agents (if the page exists).

Structure section: hyphenate 'double bonded' (double-bonded).

Grammatical change: 2nd sentence in Structure section: change to 'Due to the deprotonation of one OH group' (omit 'one of').

Structure: Do not need to explain what an anion is.

Overall, the content added greatly improves the article overall, just needs some slight adjustments.