User:Mrs.Egyptian/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(Mental health - Wikipedia)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(I am an advocate for mental health and all that it embodies. I believe that the wellness of what is going on inside of your brain in the sense of your thoughts and emotions play a big part in who you are and how you function. It wasn't until a Senior in high school where I discovered how serious laying a safe foundation down for your mental space was. Your mental is where everything becomes everything and I believe that deserves all the focus.)

Evaluate the article
(One of the first things I noticed with this article was the fact that it is not global. It stated that a good bit of the facts disclosed were U.S. based. I think that is somewhat of a red flag being that Wikipedia is used worldwide. I would evaluate this article as exclusive. There are a lot of things I like about this article so far. I like the flow of the subtopics and how they were set up. Readers are able to follow along learning "chronologically" in a sense. I will go on to say that because so many foundational topics were added, the article is very lengthy. I have to do more reading but there seem to be more problems with the article.)