User:Ms0615/American crow/Rubiii1231 Peer Review

General info

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Evaluate the drafted changes
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In the first paragraph I feel like you can add more in-depth information. Like it will be good to add more information about the forebrain, if there is some. How it functions? Or what are some examples that the crow do with having a large brain? But overall the section that you edited has some good information and has a great start, especially the second paragraph.