User:Ms1904/Nomura's jellyfish/Lsm1041 Peer Review

General info
ms1904
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Ms1904/Nomura's jellyfish - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Nomura's jellyfish - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really enjoyed reading this article, and it was easy to see what you edited because of your bolded text. I would just suggest adding more citations to the end of your sentences so the reader knows exactly where the information is coming from. Overall, I think it is a strong draft and was easy to follow. Lsm1041 (talk) 12:05, 14 March 2024 (UTC)