User:Msaimeevo/sandbox

Article Evaluation- Cheeseburger (Suggestion of Wikipedia Intertwine Chat Session)

Set of Ideas: - In the history section, towards the end of the fourth paragraph, citations on hamburgers in Hamburg, Germany should be included. - The second sentence in the Ingredients section seems like a personal opinion. - Religious section is not relevant to the central themes of a cheeseburger - Citation for the great plains and cattle ranching in the History section in the first sentence. - Reference #5 does not take you to Pasadena Sun. It doesn't have any info on it about cheeseburgers. - Maybe have a "Hamburger Records" or "Popular culture" section for inclassifiable information - Article 26 seems unreliable. New York Post is heavily slanted right. - Reference #11 is a blog post, which should not be included as reference in Wikipedia.

Ideas by Nmermoud, Msaimeevo, Christopher Sanders (user: sande2cj), PinkPanther4597, Sloth36, Nathan Blottie - Dankuu, ElizabethOgunsuyi

Article Evaluation- Chams

Politicals After conquest, the nation of Champa adopted the political organization of the Vietnamese. The patriarch of the village, along with elected officials, is in charge of enforcing customs, rulings, and ritual ceremonies. The title is passed down from father to son.