User:Mshereck01/Georgiana Bruce Kirby/Ggrueninger01 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username) Mshereck01
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Georgina Bruce Kirby User:Mshereck01/sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
 * Yep!
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Yes, it clearly states who the article is about.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * Could use a few headers, but otherwise Detailed and organized description of her life.
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * Considering that it is a new article, this is entirely new information!
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
 * It is concise! Not overly detailed, good sentence structure, easy to read!

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * yes! It is all about the life of Georgina Bruce Kirby.
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * I cannot see the bibliography for some reason, but I assume so.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * I doubt it.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * yep! The sentences are kept purely factual and neutral.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * No, its all highly factual.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * no
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
 * nope!

Sources and References
Guiding questions:

Can't see the citations. That said, I am sure that it is complete and good!


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * Are the sources current?
 * Check a few links. Do they work?

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Yep! very structured, not hard to read!
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * None that I can see.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
 * yes!

Images and Media
No pictures

Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * I think so!
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Can't see sourcese
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * no infoboxes, a few headings, but not many section headings.
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?
 * I don't think so. It should!

New Article Evaluation
Good article! I think that it might need some more clear structure, also need to include more of what makes her a notible woman. Have a lot of early life and homelife, would appreciate more detail about the things that she did for suffrage and women's rights.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * I think so!
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * Very factual, lots of information about Kirby's life.
 * How can the content added be improved?
 * More detail about her job in women's rights and lobbying!