User:Msiopy/Feminism in Greece/Wendychou.neu Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Msiopy


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Msiopy/Feminism_in_Greece?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Feminism in Greece

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Marie, I'm not too familiar with Feminism in Greece so I hope I don't sound presumptuous. :)

I see there's still lots of content in your sandbox that are not reflected on the wiki article for Feminism for Greece, so I'm assuming you are still working on it. Current article separates lead sections based on different fields however, you included a history section that picked out "In the home" section about domestic aspect of the topic. I'm not sure how you intend to break it up or having same sub section headings may be confusing. The inclusion of history background and detail description chronologically is helpful and provides a comprehensive understanding and information on the topic. The change you have for the article's "Women's organizations" is a very nice starting step for more detailed description and information including the heading change and the backlash section. If you are intending to continue improving this section, you can consider in more details and information on the groups/ orgs listed, since a lot of them don't even have a page and are just there without providing extra content (if this makes sense).

Here is a source peer reviewed academic source that may be useful for the history section:

Anastasopoulou, Maria. "THE INCEPTION OF FEMINISM IN NINETEENTH-CENTURY GREECE." Classical Bulletin, vol. 80, no. 2, 2004, pp. 171-186''. ProQuest'', https://link.ezproxy.neu.edu/login?url=https://www-proquest-com.ezproxy.neu.edu/scholarly-journals/inception-feminism-nineteenth-century-greece/docview/222248383/se-2?accountid=12826.