User:Msiopy/Ratatouille the Musical/TJScalzo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Msiopy


 * Link to the current version of the article
 * Ratatouille the Musical

Evaluate the current article

 * The lead is a little sparse and the phrasing is kind of stilted. I would check it over for grammar issues and look into adding a bit more context.
 * There are various claims in the first paragraph of the Development section alone that aren't directly cited/sourced.
 * The source at the beginning of the Musical Numbers section is odd and inconsistent with how inline citations are meant to be used. It should go after the material it is supporting. In this case, it would be reused for each line of the list.
 * I think it would be great to expand the content of the sections overall as well.

Let me know if you have any questions about my suggestions!