User:Mslillsd/Helicopter parent/Morg0078 Peer Review

Peer Review:


 * In some areas, you list overprotective as one word, and in others you list it as two words (over protective). Try and keep it consistent across the entire paragraph
 * In the section "(excessive or developmentally)" try and use the same word tense. For example, change to either (excessively or developmentally) or (excessive or dominant)
 * Make sure to cite your sources in the actual paragraph. For instance, you can use headers with the numbers 1 and 2 accordingly
 * Add a connector word such as "and" in the sentence that begins with "You may also here this..."
 * Overall, great work!

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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)