User:Msullivan31/Legionella pneumophila/Hb10715 Peer Review

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I think that you had quality information on the article! Your section on ecology of the bacteria was really interesting and allowed me to understand the habitat of the bacteria more and that led me to understand the bacteria as a whole with treatment. Something I am seeing is formatting, I know you all are getting more information to add to the article but the lead section for example could be formatted better- I feel like a of information is repeated in this section.

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