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Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Knoll (company)


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article can be improved with additional information and citations. Content regarding the company from the 1960s-1990s is missing and information on the company from the 2000s-2010s is lacking and can be brought up-to-date. The contributions of Florence Knoll are underrepresented. Use of imagery can be improved. The article provides a very general look at the company Knoll, mentioning some notable contributions and awards, but overall it feels incomplete.


 * Sources
 * Bobbye Tigerman. "'I Am Not a Decorator': Florence Knoll, the Knoll Planning Unit and the Making of the Modern Office." Journal of Design History 20, no. 1 (2007): 61-74. Accessed February 5, 2021. http://www.jstor.org/stable/4540337.

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Shiro Kuramata


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article can be enhanced with the addition of more content, including going more in-depth on the existing content as well as providing new content for a more complete article. The lead section of this article is one sentence long so that can be added to to give a more concise overview of Shiro Kuramata and the article contents. More sources and citations will also help improve the article.


 * Sources
 * "Two exhibitions -- a Shiro Kuramata retrospective and a survey of recent public buildings -- focus on innovative Japanese design.". Architectural Record. May 1998. https://advance-lexis-com.ezproxy1.lib.asu.edu/api/document?collection=news&id=urn:contentItem:3ST7-Y2W0-0091-N4RF-00000-00&context=1516831.

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Gertrude Kerbis


 * Article Evaluation
 * The content of the article provides a general overview of Gertrude Kerbis. It seems to favor mentioning the famous male designers she studied under and how their work influenced her rather than looking more in-depth at her role, therefore overshadowing her design. More content as well as the inclusion of imagery would help improve this article and including more citations would strengthen it.


 * Sources
 * Hinchman, Mark, and Yoneda, Elyssa. 2018. Interior Design Masters. Milton: Taylor & Francis Group. Accessed February 5, 2021. ProQuest Ebook Central.

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