User:Msyer/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Knoll (company)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because Knoll is a company name mentioned a lot by design professors and professionals. This articles matters because the company Knoll has an important role in the history and evolution of design as Knoll products have been and continue to be used in many great projects. My preliminary impression of the article is that is does not go that in depth on the company or their contributions to design.

Evaluate the article
The article can be improved with additional information and citations. Content regarding the company from the 1960s-1990s is missing and information on the company from the 2000s-2010s is lacking and can be brought up-to-date. The contributions of Florence Knoll are underrepresented. Use of imagery can be improved. The article provides a very general look at the company Knoll, mentioning some notable contributions and awards, but overall it feels incomplete.