User:Mtgravesande/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Economy of Guyana

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose this article because my main article is going to be related to the bauxite mines in Guyana. This article matters because the history of colonialism and imperialism impacts Guyana's economy to this day. My preliminary impression of the article is that there was a lot of information in it. Some of the sentences did not flow as nicely.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)


 * I edited some minor grammatical errors from the first paragraph.

Lead section


 * The lead section could be more detailed - should have a description of the major sections.

Content


 * The content is relevant and up-to-date.

Tone and Balance


 * The article is neutral.

Source and References


 * The article is missing a lot of sources for most of the sections.

Organization and writing quality


 * The writing needs some editing to make it more concise.


 * Overall, the article provided good background information about the economy of Guyana. More citations are needed to back up the information in the article.