User:Mtibbs/Threshold limit value/Danmi17 Peer Review

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Mtibbs
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 * Threshold limit value

Evaluate the drafted changes
Mtibb's revisions to the Threshold Limit Value Wikipedia article are helpful and provide updated information. He added a useful section regarding the history of TLVs and the formation of the first industrial hygiene organization in the United States; however, this section is not finished.

A modified definition in the introduction better explains the purpose and scope of the TLV. Mtibbs also mentions that these TLVs do not consider financial feasability; they only consider the health of the worker.

The additional information about TLVs is beneficial. I would continue to finish the section on the history of the TLV, and add more references where possible, as there are only three that I can see in the Sandbox draft.