User:Mtstace/Comparative religion/Jjw21 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mtstace


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mtstace/Comparative_religion?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Comparative religion

Evaluate the drafted changes
I looked at the sources that you are using and I was able to access them all myself. I think they look like good secondary sources to use.

I also looked at the sentence that you added to the comparative religion introduction. I think that it does add to the explanation of comparative religion and gives a little more explanation of what it is.