User:Mtsuha/sandbox

Article Evaluation

I like where this article is going. Just a few suggestions, I think it would be helpful to remove the sentence beneath the title heading “Insects of medical importance” (Medical entomologists work in the public health arena, dealing with insects (and other arthropods) that parasitize people, bite, sting, and/or vector disease). It seems unrelated to the heading and furthermore, the idea of this sentence is captured in the introduction.

Are there in text citations that could be added?

Thoughts about adding Zika to the list of major insect-borne disease?

Presenting Problem Article Edit

- Added a citation

- Reorganized the structure of the opening paragraphs

- Reworded sentences and added a few more details; hyperlinked appropriate wikipedia page for "history of present illness"