User:MulberryBrie/Pollinator/Ofrimpong1 Peer Review

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Well done on your most recent edit to the pollinator article on Wikipedia! It was very concise and forthright. I especially valued the addition of new information on the research of non-bees visits to flowers and their ineffectiveness to carry out more pollination. The significance of pollinators for plant reproduction and the potential ecological and economic effects of their decrease were further clarified by your edit. Again, I am glad for the highlight you made on Pollinator population declines and the conservation initiative been put in place. More important still, I wished you could explore how Asia and Africa are managing the pollinator population. That's an important equity gap in the article. I particularly appreciated how you used credible references to support your research findings. Thanks for adding to this important article.