User:MulberryBrie/Pollinator/VetMedIsLife7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MulberryBrie


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MulberryBrie/Pollinator?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pollinator

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like the additions you have contributed! I believe the studies that you have add to the pollinator population decline section supports the importance of pollinators. I feel it is important to discuss how continents are addressing the pollinator population decline issue, so I like that you are adding those sections. I do feel that you talk a lot about bees being pollinators. Although this is true, there are other pollinators that work as well. I would recommend adding to those sections as well. I would also consider adding more to the pesticide section and how this is impacting pollinators. Overall, great job!