User:Mullerybrux/Freshwater marsh/AvOsero Peer Review

Lead

I think your lead has a very neutral tone, and is well written when it comes to bias. The information is very clear and I think it gives a very good overview of the topic. I also appreciate the added references as well as the links to other Wiki pages. However, you should restructure your sentences a little bit. Starting every sentence with "Freshwater marsh..." is very repetitive.

Types of FW Marshes

I think adding this section of the page is a great idea. I can clearly see the differences between the types of marshes and visualize where they are located. One suggestion is adding images to each section, or specific examples. Such as "The marsh named ??? located in ??? is an example of a river marsh". Another suggestion is adding what different kinds of marine life or ecosystems are apparent in these different variations. Do their plant life change due to the variation in marsh?

Overall I think separating these variations in marshes was a really good idea, just could use some more supporting information!

Soil

I think section also helps add to my visualization of the marshes. Very good neutral tone, and overall a really good addition to the page!

Functions and Services

I think the information in this section adds a lot to the overall page. However, I am confused by the title "functions and services". It was not what I was expecting when I started to read. I think I understand your point but I would consider changing the title to "Biogeochemical impacts", "Impacts on the Earth", or something of that nature.

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