User:Mumtaziah/Moment (mathematics)/Ruby00269 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mumtaziah


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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Moment (mathematics)
 * Moment (mathematics)

Evaluate the drafted changes
- It's great that you have started in your sandbox!

- In your sandbox, you have added more in-dept definition to the "Problem of moments" section, which is very concise and clear to readers.

- In the original Wikipedia page, the "Mixed moment" section has only two sentences, you might want to add more definition to it.

- Although the section "Significance of the moment" is quite big, it looks pretty good and relevant to the topic. However, it would help to make each little topics in that section more organized and related to each other.

- A few statistical images would really help readers understand the topic more. Just make sure you caption the image you put.

- There are too little references, might want to add more. Might need to check if there are some contents that just copy-and-paste the whole thing to Wiki (some of the pages have problems like this).

- You could add more links to the "Further Reading" Section, as it only has one now.

- If you could see the contents, I feel like from "Cumulants" until the last section, is very unorganized. If you could organize each sections better, its going to really help improve the overall of this page a lot.

- According to the talk page, there are some back and forth on a few paragraphs, especially in the definition of the moment section. You might want to refer to some books or paper to clear that section out. You can read through what the previous editors wrote and try add your thoughts and reference onto the talk page to see if they agree.

- As the talk page stated, there are some errors in the "Skewness and Kurtosis" section. You might also want to help sort that out with some reference of your choice.

- Since there's only a little drafting, my recommendations were mostly based on the original "Moment" page, and what improve or add to the page.