User:Mundozurdo/Welfare's effect on poverty/Amanzo2 Peer Review

General info
Mundozurdo
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Mundozurdo/Welfare's effect on poverty
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Welfare's effect on poverty

Lead

 * The original lead was short and succinct but your additions to it help to develop understanding and apply useful theory and knowledge from class and adding nuanced understanding to the topic :)

Content

 * the content added in the Public Opinion section is really helpful on developing this section
 * I also like the new section you are developing, it better contextualizes the topic and issue especially since the original article is fairly short
 * would you maybe consider including in the public opinions section information in regards to what we recently covered in class concerning that often welfare is racialized and then loses public support

Overall:

Overall, I think you are off to a great start and these changes are helpful! Keep up the good work!! -Annabelle