User:Mundozurdo/Welfare's effect on poverty/Gakeiiyyh Peer Review

General info
Mundozurdo
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mundozurdo/Welfare's effect on poverty
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Welfare's effect on poverty

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
I think the paragraph that you added is very good and makes the lead section more comprehensive.

Content
I see that you will have a lot of work to do to revise this start-class article! I think the sections you've already edited are very good and deliver a clear point on the topic.

Perhaps, if you have the time, you could consider adding more up-to-date data to the pre- and post-welfare poverty levels table. And I like the idea of including specific examples! I believe that including the U.S. (as it changes the least pre and post) and France, Belgium, or Denmark (because these countries seem to have very effective welfare systems, as indicated by the relative poverty rates in the table) as examples would help readers better understand the effects of welfare on poverty.

Overall
I think you are doing a great job in making this article more comprehensive, and I'm excited to read your upcoming edits!!

-Yahui