User:Munzira/Shein (company)/Colum52 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Munzira


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Munzira/Shein (company)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Shein
 * Shein

Evaluate the drafted changes
Some of the initial edits are unclear about what has changed. I can't tell what is different about environmental health issues. The new paragraph for the human rights violation seems much clearer and helps state how devastating these violations are which the article didn't capture. I think you need to include your citations. The examples provided are excellent but they need to be backed up.