User:Munzira/Shein (company)/Matcha62 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Munzira


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Munzira/Shein_%28company%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Shein

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft is good, but could use some more footnotes/references within the article. The user added clarity revisions in the writing itself and gave more clarification and background to the issues regarding human rights violations of Shein. I think the edited portion of the article could benefit from more sources and references to articles that have reported about the violations within Shein. Overall I think the edits are coming along nicely, but adding some more sources to back up your writing will make it stronger.