User:MuseumHours/Library of Congress Subject Headings/Nataliamurillor Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MuseumHours


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MuseumHours/Library_of_Congress_Subject_Headings?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Library of Congress Subject Headings

Evaluate the drafted changes
I find the section about Indigenous Studies you're adding extremely important and necessary, specially the way you're highlighting the injustices around it. Your sources look really good and the text is concise and clear. I also appreciate the links you added for other articles, its helpful and easy to follow even if you're not familiarized with the Library of Congress. I noticed you mentioned to only review the first section, so I just skimmed through the rest and it is exciting to see you have a lot of information to work with. I think my only concern would be the "neutral" aspect/tone of it, I know it can be hard due the nature of the subject, but since it is such an important one, I would be extra careful with the "personal" point of view and examples, so it can be actually added to the main article. I'm really looking forward to read the completed article!