User:Mush3099/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Energy efficient driving -Energy-efficient driving


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is about things you can do to drive with as much fuel efficiency as possible. The problem with it is that it need additional citations to verify some of the suggestions and it needs more reliable sources for citations. I would improve this section by adding proper citations.


 * Sources

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Professional boxing - Professional boxing


 * Article Evaluation
 * The content is all relevant and it covers the topic. However, the section "length of bouts" is missing citations entirely. I will rewrite a portion of the "length of bouts" section to properly portray accurate information about the sport which will be supported by my citations. I will then improve this article by adding citations that support the information.


 * Sources

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Nathaniel Richards (Marvel Comics) - Nathaniel Richards (Marvel Comics)


 * Article Evaluation
 * Though the article's content is relevant to the topic, there is scarce information and not any real world context. This is about a comic book character from Marvel Comics publishing company. The article merely provides plot points from the comic book and fails to provide facts, or information. There are no proper citations or claims. I will improve this article by adding additional information to the "Publication history" section about the creation of the character, the timeline and some more information about the creators of this comic.


 * Sources

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Lehman Brothers - Lehman Brothers


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is about the Leman Brothers financial group and it covers its demise following the 2008 financial crisis. The section covering the crisis, titled "Subprime mortgage crisis" is too long and convoluted. I will improve this by adding proper subheadings, correcting information, and citing sources for all the information and legal proceedings.


 * Sources

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Deutsche Bank - Deutsche Bank


 * Article Evaluation
 * The section titled European debt crisis, 2009–today is too short and concise, and doesn't provide any data, information, or anything that's a citable claim. I will improve this article by making those changes.


 * Sources