User:Musicluvrr/Music journalism/Danielle2732 Peer Review

Your article is very well done and interesting! It is well structured and the content was up to date and relevant. Given the controversial nature of your topic, I think you did an excellent job keeping the tone neutral. If there are reliable sources, I think it would be interesting to expand on which denominations of christianity were responsible for the criticism of rock music, and also when/how their criticisms faded out of public opinion. Overall, excellent work!

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