User:Mviva22/Welfare Queen/IsmaelEden Peer Review

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Hey, if I’m correct you are making revisions to the article? If yes, you are doing great.

I do believe this topic usually is very a sensitive topic when on the political floor. This article does a great work showcasing an argument for the negative effects of the “Welfare Queen” and its effects towards black single mothers. The thought that comes to mind is that whom ever has actually taken advantage of the system discovered a flaw in the system in itself but also the need to raise Welfare benefits. The system provides no mentorship for these people who are receiving benefits and they are left to manage life and the system however they can. No one likes to struggle but in order to move up one requires mentorship especially if navigating the complex system of welfare.