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Article Evaluation
I am evaluating the article King Krule. Here are my edits:

Intro paragraph - After the mention of 6 Feet Beneath the Moon, I will add: He released his second album, The OOZ, on October 13th, 2017.

I will create a new heading, titled Life. I will practically write the entire section, since right now, there is a section titled Life and Career, however that section does not include much information about his life. Here is what I will write under Life:

Life: "Archy Marshall was born on August 24th, 1994 in London, England. From a young age, he developed discipline issues and refused to go to school, due to his many childhood struggles. Throughout his childhood, Marshall spent his time between his fathers house in Peckham and his mother's house in East Dulwich; his mother was much less strict, while his father had many rules in place for him. His father had to physically carry Marshall to school, otherwise he will skip and hide in his room. Once Marshall was 13 years old, he was given a private house tutor, until his acceptance into the Brit School for music, where he struggled with discipline initially, but soon found his place.

Marshall was tested for several mental health conditions at London's Maudsley Hospital. Marshall claims that the tests took a toll on him, and that doctors, counselors, and psychiatrists were wrong most of the time. Marshall states that he just hated everybody. He will hide in his room for hours on end, and experienced depression and insomnia; he discusses these conditions in some of his lyrics.

Marshall has always created art of many mediums, as his parents encouraged creativity throughout his childhood. Marshall's brother and the rest of his family also engage in art, although Archy stands out as the one who produces music versus visual art. Visual art is an important aspect for Marshall, seen in his carefully crafted music videos and album art.

Career: After the mention of Marshall's second album, I will add: "Under the name Archy Marshall, Marshall released an album titled A New Place 2 Drown, an album that includes 12 songs, a 208 page book of visual art and text, and a ten minute documentary. Marshall partnered with his brother, Jack Marshall, on this project. " (source works for the citation needed as well). Marshall wanted the album to have a physical component, as well as something for the eyes and the ears. Marshall released the album under Archy Marshall rather than King Krule to differentiate between the two different genres of music, as A New Place 2 Drown has a hip hop component rather than the dark alternative/jazz sound of 6 Feet Beneath the Moon.

Marshall took to NTS Radio, hosted by Mount Kimbie, and released two songs under his name Edgar the Beatmaker. The first song is an untitled number, the second song is titled "When and Why".

Underneath the mention of "Czech One", I will add: "In September 2017, Marshall released a new song entited "Dum Surfer". It was released under King Krule." After the brief mention of The Ooz, I will add: "The album included the singles released within the previous two months, as well as 17 new songs. The album received high reviews, ranking it the #83 most discussed album of 2017 and the #75 most shared album of 2017 . The album ranked 23 out of 100 on Official Chart Ranking, and was ranked 8.7 out of 10 based on 56 ratings.

Marshall has received high praise from many popular artists, such as Beyonce and Frank Ocean, who are fond of his dark jazz vibes, Ocean even proposing to do a collaboration with Marshall. "

Music Style and Influences: Under influences, I will add that the Pixies and the Libertines were also huge influences on him, since he will listen to them when he couldn't sleep at night as a child.